Wikapedia

I looked at the Wikipedia article for the 1798 Revolt of the Alfaiates. The article is very underwhelming, and is no more than a paragraph long. It gives a brief introduction of where the revolt took place, the fact that it was a slave rebellion, stating it was a separatist movement, and the objectives of the rebellion. What it did not give me was whether or not it was actually successful, or any kind of outcome from the revolt. It leaves out significant figures or major battles of conflicts. The only thing that we see is that it had a popular base of slaves.

The article lacks any sources, and draws all its evidence from one book. It has only one foot note at the end of the article so it shows that there was minimal effort put into researching it.

What the article needs is not just what happened during the revolution, but events leading up to it and the end results and legality that came from it. Notable figures, influences of literature, cultural context, anything else to give the reader an idea of why the event was important in the eyes of history.

Sept 8 Wikipedia Article Blog

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moctezuma_I

The Wikipedia article I would like to critique is about Moctezuma I, the second Aztec emperor and fifth king of Tenochititlan. The article is easy to read because of its short length but is not sufficient to give the reader more complete picture of Moctezuma’s rule and his impact on Aztec Empire. While containing largely relevant information regarding the topic, the content of the article is mostly comprised of snippets of factoids about Moctezuma I, lacking deep and profound details of his life and legacy. It should also be noted that despite its mostly neutral stance towards the topic and a few references that works well and easy to track down, this article does not seem to be a product of expert academic research, judging by its notable lack of footnotes. The citation seems to be quite a significant problem in this article, for nowhere I could found the evidence that the references are sufficiently supporting the contents of the article. It would have been a lot better if the writers of this article tried to put more details and information into the article and properly cited the referenced works.

It also seemed like there have been very few attention to this article, for in the “talks” page there were only four very short conversations went on about its contents. These were about the Triple Alliance, Codex Mendoza reference, orthograpy of the article title – Moctezuma – and some unencyclopedic phrases contained in previous versions of the article. What is more troubling about the article, however, is that it is a part of several WikiProjects: Mesoamerica, Aztec, Middle Ages, etc. Not so surprisingly, it is rated level 4 vital article, for its lack of substance in spite of the fact that the topic is so important in understanding the foundation of Aztec Empire.

9/6 Class Notes

In class on Wednesday we began by going over general information involving our wikipedia training.  The most important part of information was that we need to find an article related to the class and post a critique of it, using the information we learned in training as guidelines.  After this we listened to Julia talk about renewable energy in Chile.  Given Chile’s location it is hard for people to have reliable access to energy, so having wind turbines proved incredibly helpful.  Chile’s windy climate further helped the turbines utility.

Per usual, after these two items we divided into groups based on people around us to discuss what we read the day before and our answers for the Historical Analysis Prep involving the Quipus, an important part of Incan culture.  We discussed the importance of various figures towards the Quipus, including a Spaniard, an Incan who was taught Spanish and served as a translator, as well as someone who was half Inca, half Spanish.  Quipus were a matter of great culture importance for the Incan, as it allowed them to keep information without having a written language.  This was met with curiosity by the Spaniard in question, as opposed to the feelings of disgust amongst other Spaniards.  Even today these quipus are incredibly important to the indigenous people of Peru.

Following our discussion on the readings, we watched the short video in class again about the quipus in modern day.  This opened up an interesting dialogue about how to interpret the video and the creator’s views.  Multiple images were utilized as well as audio clips of native people talking about how the quipus are still a treasure amongst people.  One critique that came up was that in the slideshow, some of the images did not have much to do with his main point, essentially distracting the audience and possibly making his point harder to understand.

As for terms, we in particular focused on the definition of Mita. Mita was an Inca institution where people had to perform forced labor for the central government, mainly involving construction of large buildings, roads, or waterways. These people were to come from all over.  This reflected how when the Incas conquered other people, they drafted men into their military, thus increasing their strength.  An important distinction was made in class involving the term forced labor and slavery.  It is important for us to realize the key differences between slavery and forced labor, especially the racial aspect that existed in uprooting Africa people from their homeland and exploiting their labor.

Another term/idea we discussed was the geography of the Andes that was well utilized by the Incan people.  Given the Andes was an incredibly hilly area, with plenty of different altitudes, it could be very hard to have sustainable life in the area.  The Incan, though, made the best of their situation by setting terrace farms and grew different crops in different areas, for example growing cacao in lower, warmer areas and other plants in the higher, colder areas.  KH Note: this is called a “vertical archipelago” system.  An interesting fact we discussed was how the high altitude proved helpful for the breathing habits of people, looking particularly at soccer and how the high altitude mountains made it hard for people who were not acclimated to the altitude to perform.

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Exam Questions:

  • How do the quipus relate to another important concept we have discussed in class: material culture? What do they say about materialism in Incan society?
  • What potential issues could have plagued the Incan considering their geographic location in the andes? How did they navigate these issues? What does this tell you about the Incan people?
  • Name 2-3 examples of how the cultures of Spaniards were fused with the Incan.  What does this tell you about the interactions between the two very different cultures?

 

Wikipedia Article Critique

I looked at the Guarani War article. All of the information in this article seems relevant to the topic. Nothing clearly stood out as not belonging. The article seems neutral with no viewpoints expressed. It simply explains the facts without any attempts to persuade the reader. The only source cited is an English language book on the suppression of the Jesuits by the Catholic Church. The source seems reliable and non-biased and does talk about the Jesuit missions and the Guarani who were involved in the war. There is also a link to another book about the Guarani under Spanish colonial rule, however it is not cited in any of the text of the article. Of the three external links that included in the article two work and one does not. This broken link is supposed to link to the Madrid Treaty (1750). The article mainly talks about what the Spanish and Portuguese did. It mentions some of what the Guarani did, but does not have as much information on them as it does the Portuguese and Spanish. The one citation that the article does have links to the book about the suppression of the Jesuits on Google books. The link works, but the page cited does not have the information cited. It instead talks about the later expulsion of the Jesuits by the Spanish colonial governor in 1767, over a decade after the Guarani War. None of the information seems out of date. There is definitely more information that could be added. More information about every part of this topic could be added as the article is very basic. There is no discussion on the talk page. The article is rated as a start-class article and of low-importance. It is part of several WikiProjects, including those on the indigenous peoples of the Americas, military history, and the histories of Brazil, Argentina, Paraguay, Portugal, and Spain. This article mostly covers topics we have not yet discussed in depth in class. It does talk about the Guarani, who we have mentioned in class. It only really says that they were a group of indigenous peoples who lived at the missions in question and fought against the Spanish and Portuguese when they tried to move the missions. Ultimately, the major issues with this article are the lack of information and the lack of sources.

Renewable Energy in Chile

Chile’s renewable energy program is drastically changing the way that rural areas are living their lives. Since 2014, when the electric market was opened up to the private sector and renewable energy was incentivized, many of the villages who had no power at all, or had blackouts every day have been able to receive 24-hour a day power. In the past, much of Chile’s renewable power has come from water, which has caused considerable amounts of flooding and the destruction of indigenous lands. However, the solar panels and wind farms have had little pushback or negative effects to the communities around them.

The installation of wind and solar farms has drastically changed the life of the people in rural communities, which tend to be poorer than communities in big cities. “Steady electricity has brought about both trivial and profound changes, he said. It’s possible to have ice cream now. More significantly students used to be sent to larger cities to continue their education after eighth grade. But soon, the village will have a high school.” (Ernesto Londoño)  Bringing power to more remote indigenous villages allows them to be connected to the world while also being able to maintain the traditions of their towns and families.

This article relates to the geographical history which we have discussed in class, through the article’s discussion of the conditions in Chile that make it an optimal country to have an extensive amount of renewable power. This article also connects in showing the lives of indigenous peoples now, and showing how indigenous peoples are a group who did not just disappear after Spanish colonization, but now live modern lives.

LONDOÑO, ERNESTO. “Chile’s Energy Transformation Is Powered by Wind, Sun and Volcanoes.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 12 Aug. 2017, www.nytimes.com/2017/08/12/world/americas/chile-green-energy-

Class Notes – 8/30

We started class on Wednesday by clarifying that we need sign up for Wikipedia as soon as possible, and that we will be having our Map Quiz at the beginning of class on Monday, September 4. Alberto presented his Latin America in the News post, which dealt with the Guarani people of Paraguay, and a recent celebration to help promote and celebrate diversity.

Afterwards, we identified various popular terms used for referring to the indigenous populations of the Americas (Indian, Native American, First Nations) and recognized that it is important to refer to groups of people/individuals as they want to be identified. In addition to this, it is important to recognize what these phrases can’t do; when looking at this history of colonialism, we need to understand that there is a huge amount of cultural and linguistic diversity. If an observer thinks about the history of colonizing Latin America as only two populations, Indigenous Latin Americans vs. Spanish Invaders, the history will not be easily understood.

After this discussion, we were split into groups for the rest of the class. The first topic was looking at why we chose certain areas of Latin/South America as likely to be inhabited. After talking among ourselves, we created a class list of important influences for deciding where large civilizations can form; access to waterways for transportation/trade, access to fresh water, the right amount of rainfall, flat land, non-extreme temperatures, and the ability to grow a surplus of food so people can contribute labor towards anything other than agriculture.

This was how we discussed the importance of environment, as environmental factors are what determines where large groups of people can live/gather. The environment determines what indigenous/Spanish populations could interact and at what historical moments. We didn’t necessarily quote any specific passages when discussing this, but the discussion relied heavily on the maps provided for readings and Bauer’s analysis of the environment’s importance in the development of history throughout the world (16).

After this, we moved on to collectively define Material Culture. Values are assigned to goods, imprinting societal values onto physical objects. They become valued outside of their pure economic value. These objects are used to define a community’s/individual’s culture; what does a particular object’s presence mean/represent? What does an image seen on repeated pieces of pottery in a specific region mean? This method is incredibly useful when looking at the remains of a civilization, as it displays the relationship between the society and nature, how leisure time was spent, how race & gender manifested, and much more. Food in particular is an incredibly significant aspect!

Links

I’ve found two links by the historian Jared Diamond that deal with his theory of the environment’s role in the formation of civilizations, one addressing his original formulation of the theory and another applying his own theories to the current global climate. I’ve also found an article that works to apply theories of Material Culture to the contemporary production of art in Michigan.

Potential Exam Questions

 

  • Imagine you are researching the remains of an ancient culture, and you’ve noticed that one particular type of object has been found multiple times throughout the site. What conditions would help you determine the role that they played in this society?
  • Are there any other non-human factors, other than the environment, that need to be considered when determining where civilization can thrive?
  • Try applying the idea of material culture to contemporary American society: What will future historians think our cultural values were by looking at American currency?